Figurative Language

Personification

Similes

Alliteration

Metaphors

Onomatopoeia

One Cold wet day a geek named Bob who got himself a lottery ticket. He was so excited to see if he won.

As the the Sun sat on the hill, Bob went home as quickly as lightning and turned on the TV. He saw that Frazier Gazier was announcing the lottery ticket numbers for 5 million dollars. Once He heard the lottery numbers he looked at his ticket , then his face was shocked and he could not Believe he won. “OMG this is unbelievable,” said Bob. “What do I do what do I do.” “ I know I am going to skydive, anyway time flies and wait’s for no one.” he said.

After that day Bob called his best friend Zac ,and then asked if he wanted to come skydiving with him. “Hello mate do you want to come skydiving with me?“Yeah sure”.

Bob went to pick Zac up. Honk, “are you coming” Shouted Bob. “I have to hurry home because grandma wants her waffles.”  Bob was a bit nervous when they got near the plane because he had never been skydiving before, and he didn’t want to do it. “I can’t do this” said Bob . “ Sure you can Bob, you can you're a machine on the football pitch and your not scared of anyone you face ”. “ok”

They left and Bob looked down in great fear.”Achoo”. If you're going to cough, please cover your mouth”. “Those house’s are the size of my finger”.” Yea they look really small” says Zac. Then once it was time to jump the pilot opened the door for Zac and Bob. Instructors were there to tell them what to do when they jump. Zac reached for his parachute and looked down really excited to jump, But Bob wasn’t that excited.

As they were getting ready to jump the plane turned a little to the right, then a bit of gasoline spilt on Bob's parachute, But Bob didn’t notice at the time. It was time to jump and Bob’s Big, bright, Baldy shined in the sun. Once Bob jumped the parachute lit up on fire, and then Bob screamed in fright. “Don’t worry Bob take the parachute off your back grab hold of me”!!! Zac yelled. Then Bob took off the parachute  the speed of light and tried to grab hold of Zac. Then just as they were going to hit the solid and wet ground Bob got hold of Zac’s waste and then Zac got them to safety. They got to the ground, Bob was never happy before in his life. Then Zac started jumping for happiness.“Thank you Thank you so much if it weren't for you i would of been dead by now” said Bob.

“No problem” said Zac. “I am never ever in my life going to Skydive again”.“hahahahahaha”

From there Bob never ever skydived again and they lived happily ever after.

LI: to use descriptive language in a narrative text.

This week for writing we learnt about Onomatopoeia, Personification, Similes, Metaphors and Alliteration. For our task we had to go off and add Onomatopoeia, Personification, Similes, Metaphors and Alliteration's to our narrative that we wrote. These make our story more interesting and exciting to read. I learnt what Onomatopoeia, Personification, Similes, Metaphors and Alliteration means.