Activity 1: Let’s imagine that you were on the first waka to arrive at Shag Point. You had never been to New Zealand before and you had no idea what to expect. Write a poem describing how you would have felt when you arrived in New Zealand. Would you have been excited or scared? I would have felt pretty nervous, I reckon…
The waka sits in front of me.
One step after another I go in the waka.
There's no one to be seen, just me.
As rain falls upon me, I cover my self with a blanket.
Hours go by, then I see land.
It was so beautiful.
I felt as once all was the best.
Hey Fraidoon
ReplyDeleteGreat job on creating your poem! It's not easy to create one (Trust me - I know about spending hours trying to figure one out). You did a excellent job! Keep it up.
Daniel
WOW Fraidoon! This is very creative, I especially like your first line, it totally hooked me in. Well done for taking part in the Winter Learning Journey. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your posts :)
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Fraidoon
ReplyDeleteYour poem sounds amazing. You have used some good words. I created one as well and it took long to make. Keep up the spectacular work!
Hi Fraidoon. I like your poem. I would be scared and nervous, if it was my first time landing in New Zealand. You have completed this task very well. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHey Fraidoon!
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool poem! As I was reading I could picture the adventure that was taking place as you rowed into the shores of New Zealand!
Well done Fraidoon!
Nicky