Show me, don’t tell me
WALT write descriptive sentences.
Tell me sentence
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Show me sentence
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There was a boy called Seth.
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Seth was running because he was afraid…
Seth ran fast, as the wind blew in his face.
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There was a boy called Rohan.
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Rohan hid there in the grey tree trunk.
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pIt was night time
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Outside there was no light and it was very dark.
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Rohan ran away from school because he got a letter.
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As my feet carried me across the school grounds, my hand clutched the letter from Mr Wong.
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Rohan ran as fast as he could to get away from the villains in the forest.
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Rohan believed that he will make it out alive.
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Once there was a boy named harald
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He was running away from extraordinary Tsunami
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There was boy called rohan he was running in the park.
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Rohan ran in the dusty of the woods.
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Once there was a boy called Rohan
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Rohan vanished the whole school.
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Seth ran to his grandpa. |
As seth ran he was nervous to tell his grandpa happy new years.
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