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Tuesday, 26 May 2015

Recraft The Soldiers

                                 The Soldiers


It was 12:45 and everybody was training. A few hours later Billy saw a man sneaking past the guards when the man was in a good place the man shot at Billy. But Luckily the guy that shot missed. At night when all the army people were asleep another guy named Ryan came and stole all the guns and ran away.


In the morning when all the people woke up to train they couldn't find their guns so they started looking for them. They needed to find their guns because at any time the german and turkish army could come and kill us. Then they looked every where then Zac found a gun and gave it to Billy because Billy is the most responsible and excellent soldier. Billy and Zac went to find the guns that were lost so they can give it to their crew members.


So they left the training area to look for the stolen guns. They both searched hard and still couldn't find them and a few minutes later Billy saw some guns. After that they went to take them but the guards saw billy so they started to shoot at him. When the guards were shooting at him he dodged all of the bullets and went behind a wall and started shooting at them till they were dead. When they were dead billy and Zac got the packs of guns it was heavy but they did it.

While they were going back to their mates Zac saw the German and Turkish army with his binoculars. It was good that they were close to where his mates were. When They got there Billy and Zac warned everyone that an army is coming so everyone got their guns and went to fight. If they didn't have their guns they would of gotten killed.They fought till some of the armies retreated. So our army went back to Australia. It was sad because some people from our side died. Those people’s parents, brothers and sisters were crying. But Billy and Zac were happy because they made it through the war.

2 comments:

  1. Faridon you have done a good job.

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  2. Hi Fraidoon.I really like how you use simple sentences for your narrative writing about soldiers going to war.I learnt that the solders who went to fight for New Zealand army team had to find a lost gun that were special to them.

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